Destroyers Must Choke - 8 by BlackbloodedSshae, literature
Literature
Destroyers Must Choke - 8
I woke up in a pleasant mood, belly rumbling, but happy. My human love lay there next to me, shirtless. I watched his tiny chest rise and fall easily, silently. I wished I could have laid there next to him forever, but I knew neither of us could. Yawning, I sat up and threw my legs over the edge of the bed, hungry for my breakfast. As I began to slide off, a twig-like hand wrapped around my waist and tugged me back. I leaned back to peck him lightly on his warm forehead, smiled, and walked out of the room toward the door.
Ed reclined on the lounge in his usual spot. The demons eyes were closed but I knew he was awake, the sneak.
Ok so here is a little dinky thing that should clear up the confusion with Nero's (the Destroyer's) eyes, as they change color. :D Ehh.. Kasimir is German for Destroyer hehehe.. The reason I had his eyes be all color-changy and what not is because I find that eyes are very revealing, like words or emotions, just a silent type. Eyebrows help with this too but uhh. I thought eyebrows changing colors was a little strange lol...Ahaha. Yeah so here we go:
The colors mean:
red - anger, the brighter the madder
brown - embaressment
grey - sorrow
light blue - happiness, calm or no outstanding emotion
dark blue or purple - pain, purple is more i
Ok so here is a little dinky thing that should clear up the confusion with Nero's (the Destroyer's) eyes, as they change color. :D Ehh.. Kasimir is German for Destroyer hehehe.. The reason I had his eyes be all color-changy and what not is because I find that eyes are very revealing, like words or emotions, just a silent type. Eyebrows help with this too but uhh. I thought eyebrows changing colors was a little strange lol...Ahaha. Yeah so here we go:
The colors mean:
red - anger, the brighter the madder
brown - embaressment
grey - sorrow
light blue - happiness, calm or no outstanding emotion
dark blue or purple - pain, purple is more i
Ah well~
I've pretty much come to the decision to stop my Destroyers O.S.
I just think it sounds WAY too much like Twilight and it really bugs me, cause I hate Twilight with a passion. They're also written very awkwardly..It just doesn't flow. This account will basicaly be abandoned for now. I plan to go and help my friend http://fantasmorte.deviantart.com/ with writing her stories, as she's so much better a writer than I am, but she has trouble with ideas. If you like vampires, go check her out. She'll be posting her stuff soon hopefully :] Thanks to the few people who encouraged me while I tried to take BBS on dA somewhere, I appreciate i
I liked how it portrayed the power of what pen and paper can do, if even to just one man alone. Or how the beginning of a nice little story can twist and mutate into something uncontrollable and rushing as though it is no longer you who controls the pen. The inner conflict that comes to all writers is more or less powerful to each one, but "Writer" goes on a more extreme level that opens eyes quite wide. The turmoil that can come with writing is indeed profound.
I actually wrote it to convey something a bit different. 1. Imagine the writer really is a god. If god exists(for me anyway) this is the only logical way he could exist: a split personality. 2. What you write reflects what is going on in your mind. Even if it isn't readable by any normal criteria, like you said, it can twist the nicest thing into something that would shock poe.